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NDIP Proceedings (Merlin) [message #21587] Wed, 04 October 2017 15:15 Go to next message
Ken Suzuki
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I'm posting this message for Merlin.

A draft for the NDIP conference proceedings for our contribution about the PANDA BTOF, presented by Merlin, is there for your review.
Please send back your feedback here.

Best,
Ken
Re: NDIP Proceedings (Merlin) [message #21589 is a reply to message #21587] Thu, 05 October 2017 12:11 Go to previous messageGo to next message
Nico Kratochwil is currently offline  Nico Kratochwil
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some minor comments:

[36] not sure yet if they are completely independent. maybe skip "idependent"
[39] maybe beamline sounds better than beam pipe.
[42] on each supermodule, not supermodules. same in line [46]: each short end of the scintillator 4 ...

best, Nico
Re: NDIP Proceedings (Merlin) [message #21616 is a reply to message #21587] Mon, 09 October 2017 16:27 Go to previous messageGo to next message
Ken Suzuki
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Hallo Merlin,

I send you my comments in pdf.

Please try to use Adobe Acrobat/Acroreader or something compatible to see properly the comments.
I have ca. 38 comments. Pls check.

Best regards,
Ken
Re: NDIP Proceedings (Merlin) [message #21622 is a reply to message #21587] Mon, 09 October 2017 17:33 Go to previous message
Sebastian Zimmermann is currently offline  Sebastian Zimmermann
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Hallo Merlin

Meine Korrekturen sind im Anhang die geschlängelten Linien und die roten Linien die Worte durchstreichen. Dominiks Korrekturen sind auch dabei als Kommentare und gelbe Markierungen.
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